Here is my $0.02.
Up the late hops. I'd go with 2 ounces of Cascade at flameout instead of one. I would probably drop the special roast a bit but not sure what your SRM is with a pound. Too much special roast can be overwhelming. I'm not really an S-04 fan so I'd probably use 05 but thats all personal preference.
Looks tasty regardless. I always try and pick up some Great Lakes beer when I'm in Chicago. Haven't tried the Nosferatu though.
A good brew will quench the parched soul
C - Lambic
Tap - Red Lager, Black Lager, Patersbier, Cream Ale
Bottle - Barleywine, Mead, Flanders Red, Wit Wine